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Сегодня получили домашнее задание следующего типа.

What's wrong?
Students and non-native speakers sometimes use strange expressions. Correct the following sentences which are grammaticaly wrong. (Sometimes there may be more than one correct answer)

Example:

They are discussing about how to improve the tax system.

Answer:
They are discussing how to improve the tax system.

1. We are invited to her marriage.
2. I apologize to disturb you.
3. He asked more money.
4. We appreciate you for your kidness.
5. Mini-skirts are recently popular among young women.
6. He was absent for a business trip.
7. See you next morning.
8. I love Korea, specially in spring
9. The result is satisfied.
10. It is not allowed to smoke here.
11. I'll marry you in case you stop smoking.
12. She was dead from a traffic accident.
13. I have difficulty to persuade her.
14. They sent it me.
15. Do you know to make coffee?
16. I'm learning to drive a car.
17. The cost is expensive.
18. I have a promise with him at 6 p.m.
19. MOst of people are afraid of death.
20. The department store is attracting a lot of clients by lowering price.
21. He speaks English very good.
22. She's not saying the truth.
23. The company is very incompetent in the fast-food market.
24. He became mad when he heard the news.
25. She drives very fastly.
26. I don't know he is honest.
27. He didn't mind to show me the way to the hotel.
28. Did you go to swim yesterday?
29. He's busy to read books.
30. They're doing their best to search missing people in the accident.

Пожалуйста помогите исправить ошибки. Если не будет трудно объясните почему так, а не так.Заранее спасибо.

[Kира]

1. we are invited to her wedding (marriage - брак. нельзя быть приглашенным на брак)

[Kира]

2. I apologize for disturbing you. (извиняешься ЗА что-то)
3. he asked FOR more money
4. We appreciate YOUR kindness (мы ценим вашу доброту - то, что ценим ВАС как бы само имеется в виду)
5. тут много как можно сказать.
6. тут зависит от контекста. может быть He was absent on a business trip (в командировке его не было - к примеру если группой ехали) или He was absent because of a business trip (его где-то не было, потому что в командировку укатил)

Я думаю, что в предложении про бизнесс трип имеется в виду: He is AWAY for a business trip.

[Kира]

7. Обычно говорят - see you tomorrow morning.
8. I love Korea, Especially in the spring
9. The result is satisfactory. (результат не удовлетворен - satisfied, а удовлетворительный)
10.It is not allowed to smoke here - не вижу проблемы в предложении, так говорят (в штатах, по кр.мере). можно сказать - smoking is not allowed here. Если уж придираться.
11. I'll marry you if you'll stop smoking
12 She died in a traffic accident.
13. I have difficulties persuading her. Просто так звучит правильно - почему - хз.

В придаточном предложении с If будущее время не употребляется: I'll you if you stop smoking.

allowed to smoke here. (глагол allow требует дополнения (субъект, которому "позволено" делать что-то - напр. it is not allowed you to smoke here или субстантивной формы как в первом примере)

А говорят "traffic accident"? Как-то это звучит... ммм... тяжеловато. Может, She died in a CAR accident?

[Kира]

14. They sent it TO me
15. Do you know HOW to make coffee?
16. Вижу несколько легитимных вариантов - I'm learning to drive. I'm learning how to drive a car.
17. The cost is high. OR: This is expensive
18. бред какой-то. Может, appoitment at 6?